im trying to put together a long chain of lyrical poems.
PLEASE READ AND COMENT
i need some feedback (:


only trust yourselfhe's got u in a glass bottleonly trust yourself
he's waiting to see you fall and spliter
the fragments of your being skattered on the floor
come now girl ...
can't you see?
you love him more then he could ever love you or... anyone else...
so let's climb on out together because..
were starting something
something true and solid
something you can rely on
were building on our own faith
that's the only thing we can trust
they told us it was wrong...
now you know why rules were made to be broken
but come now girl...
is this what u realy


match made in heavenhow can you say that you love me? do you even know what love is? no? well ive seen this match made in heaven and i can understand what im feeling.. they say we're too young just confused and too naivematch made in heaven
but we know what we're feeling cause we feel that we're falling... falling into something deeper then we know
how can you say you love me? do you even know what love is? no? well ive seen this match made in heaven
and i will tell you what im feeling.. someones tied a knot across our souls you've got a hook in my heart and its reel

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"I smile... say I love you... and wonder what you're thinking..."
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I wanna have at least one friend on here, but you have made it impossible.
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WTF YOU GUYS?!?! WTF?!
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"Australia is like Jack Nicholson. It comes right up to you and laughs very hard in your face in a highly threatening and engaging manner." - Douglas Adams
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Opinions were like kittens; i was giving them away.
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All right. Who wants some? Who's next? Huh? How 'bout it? Who wants some? Huh? Who wants to have a little? You. You want some more? *hand to ear* Huh?! You wanna have a little? Do ya?
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Every day of the week is a Happy Monday. That being said, I still can never get the hang of Thursdays.
~D.D.
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